By Anne Hawkinson
Think big, think small. Imagine the entire story, but don’t forget the smallest of details. Sometimes my mind feels like a rubber band, stretching to its outer limit while remaining stationary and focused. As a writer, I have to be able to do both.
The first draft of my story is complete in all of its pathetic glory. It’s not very good – there are huge gaps and lots of unanswered questions. It was hard not to go back and edit, because I like to correct what is wrong before moving ahead (in my life and in my writing). But the goal was to get the entire story out of my head and down on paper. I achieved that. It felt good. Really good. And as I pawed through the pathetic, I found a lot of good bits, unearthing nuggets to a really good story.
I needed to wrestle my first draft into a manageable document for the second. While trying to do this, I tried out several ways of re-writing the story and making it better than the first draft. I discovered that plotting is my weak spot – I have great scenes and present wonderful scenarios, but don’t always have the story going where it should, or I send my characters down a dead end road into oblivion. My patient, dedicated writing coach/editor and I agonized through the process over the course of several meetings and that’s where my own Divide and Conquer method was born.
I love how it works. Creative efficiency. For example, it eliminates the time and effort spent writing a five-page scene that ends up going nowhere and has to be trashed. It works for me because I like efficiency (yes creative minds can be efficient and organized) and it helps me bring order, bit by bit, to my chaotic, first draft as it morphs into the second.
First, we used the plot clock to organize the story into the four major quadrants (for my genre – middle grade, about 50 pages each) and labeled them accordingly. Then, I went back and outlined each scene (15-20) of the first quadrant (some were pared down, some were merged, and some were eliminated so you have to write extras). After review and revision, it is “good to go.” Quadrant One: Done! But not “done done.”(Final edits will take place once the entire second draft is complete.) So, done for now. Since I already wrote the story once (the reward for getting it out of head and onto paper), it was a matter of keeping the good bits and re-writing the rest. Sounds easy, but it’s not. But it was easier than going back and starting over from scratch.
On to Quadrant Two. More scene outlining, and meeting with my coach/editor. Some scenes will be dropped, some need enhancement, and there will be new ones to create.
Back to the stretching rubber band. At the same time I’m focusing on the Second Quadrant, I have to plot out the entire search process for my main character and her two friends from the time they begin, where they go, and where the answer to the riddle is hidden (vital plot points to the entire story). I’m grateful for a fresh, flexible rubber band, because a loud snap in the wee hours of the morning would be bad.
Okay, you were waiting to see how your schedule shook out. Or you procrastinated. Bottom line: if you recently hopped onto the FWA website to register for the 2014 Annual Florida Writers Conference, “Stars of Florida Writers,” you found the item—poof!—gone from the shopping cart! Ditto, signups for faculty interviews.
No worries. You may register onsite. Simply arrive a little early (say, 45 minutes) to allow us time to process your paperwork and create your conference badge. The Registration Desk is open Friday 6am-6pm, Saturday 7am-5pm, and Sunday 7am-9am.
We take cash, checks, or credit cards but not American Express. Limited interview appointments are available, so after you register at the Registration Desk, you may wish to move directly to the Interview Desk to make your appointments with faculty. Interviews are booked first-come, first-served. Also, big news! Currently, RPLA Banquet guest tickets are now open to all, so if you would like to bring a guest, please sign him or her up.
There are a bazillion new things this year—too many to recap here—but you may want to make note of the Twitter contest. Pure fun, no work: just tweet a status update, picture, or anything else related to the conference and include the tag #FWA2014, and you’ll have a chance to win a free mini-conference registration.
See you at the annual conference!
“Stars of Florida Writers”
$375 for the entire weekend, which is from Friday to Sunday with all meals included. ($35 additional for Thursday evening workshops)
Today’s exercise is more of a preparation for the conference, if you’re going. (And you should. It’s the best conference in the history of writer’s conferences.)
If you have an interview booked with a publisher or agent, it’s probably going to be nervous-making for you, right up to the time you hit your stride with him or her.
Today’s exercise isn’t so much a writing exercise as a visualization exercise. What’s going to happen when you sit down across the table from that person and how are you going to respond? What will you say for your pitch? What will they ask in return? What will your response be?
If you’ve never been there, it’s a scary prospect. If you’ve done it before…it’s probably still a scary prospect. After all, you’ve done all this work on this story with these people who’ve been in your head forever. It’s important for you.
That’s why it’s useful to think it through.
Uhh, this is a writing exercise…
Yes. Yes, it is. And the feelings you’ll have during that time are transferable to other times of great nervousness. So write the scene–or a similar one.
Time limit: 40 minutes
By CP Bialois
To be honest, I love them both. The kindle (or Nook or whatever device you prefer) allows us to carry around hundreds of books in our pockets. The convenience they offer is second to none as you can read a PDF from your computer on your device as well. What’s not to love about that?
The one bad thing is when you purchase an e-book, you are really only buying the right to “borrow” the book. This became obvious after a recent article cycled around the internet about Amazon preventing a person from accessing the library she paid for. Even this, depending on your point of view, isn’t necessarily a bad thing as some sites like Smashwords lets you download the books as a PDF, which can be saved on your computer indefinitely. It’s all about our preference.
Speaking of preference, while I love my kindle and e-books, I will always love the physical books. Nothing compares to holding a book in your hand. The feel of the cover and pages, the sound of you turning them, and even the smell is so awesome. That’s right folks, I’m a book sniffer. Now don’t worry, I don’t do that to library books or books I don’t buy. If I do buy them, I will sniff to my heart’s content. The only thing close to the smell of a new book is fresh-cut grass, at least in my opinion.
Of course, the downside is having enough space to put the books. Anytime we go into the library or thrift store, I go right to the books being sold. Nearly every time I turn to my wife with an armload of books and a goofy, crap-eating smile on my face. Her response? “We don’t have room.”
Now, I know she’s right, but I refuse to give up my books without a fight, or some pouting if needed. Needless to say, I lose just about every time. What can I say? I’m a book junkie. Lol
What’s your preference? Do you like one over the other or any format in general?
Editor’s Note: The following is adapted from the Conference Chairperson’s Message in the program for “Stars of Florida Writers,” 13th faculty and the explanation of the today’s publishing options. Thank you, Jennie!
—By Jennie Jarvis/2014-15 Faculty Chairperson
Stepping into a new leadership position in any organization can be challenging, but even more so when you are taking over from Veronica Hart. She’s done such a great job programming our annual conference in the past that I knew I had big shoes to fill. But I’ve always been up for a challenge!
More than anything else, I wanted to program a conference that catered to all kinds of writers— whether they are at the shaky beginning of their career or are stable veterans with multiple published titles. To do that, I created our “Education Tracks.” These tracks allowed me to create content that could meet the needs of every writer.
Also, since this year’s conference theme is “Stars of the Florida,” I reached out to some of the brightest stars of our industry working today! We have New York Times and USA Today Bestselling Authors. We have powerhouse agents and editors. We even have filmmakers ready to turn your stories into tomorrow’s feature films.
While those are our brightest stars, don’t overlook the rest of the stellar faculty. They might not have credits as impressive, but they have a lot of wisdom and experience that they are graciously sharing with the rest of us. I’m very proud of every member of my faculty, and I can’t wait for each of you to realize how amazing they all are!
Once you discover the genius of each faculty member, don’t forget to sign up to meet for a private interview with your favorites. You can get advice from our Bestsellers like Mary Burton or Lyla Payne.
If you are ready to pitch your work, you can sign up to meet with an agent, acquisition editor, or filmmaker. You even have the chance to book a critique session with three incredible faculty members dedicated to helping you make your writing even better. Read the Faculty Landscape below to help you decide the best faculty member for you to meet based on your publishing goals!
I know I’m the “new kid on the block” at the FWA Annual Conference, but I hope I’ve taken a good step towards fulfilling those large shoes Veronica left behind. My hope is that I’ve lined up such an amazing faculty, you’ll be upset that you can’t go to everything! Read more…
Good morning, guys. :) With October here and November fast approaching, I thought this would be a good post to share today. I’ve always enjoyed NaNoWriMo and this, to me, is a great explanation of why. I love the challenge and the impending deadline breathing down my neck as I try to figure out what on earth is going to happen in my words that day.
My NaNo books are never perfect, but that’s not the point. The point is, I committed to my book and my writing each day. I am looking forward to once again jumping in and connecting with other local writers at the write-ins, which is a whole other thing that makes this challenge fun.
What about you? Are you a NaNo participant? Thinking about it? Don’t get it? Comment and let’s chat about it! I’ll see you all again next time!
Originally posted on Kristen Lamb's Blog:
NaNoWriMo. There are a lot of opinions floating around about NaNo and I can’t tell you guys what to do. Wait, I do that all the time. Hmmm. Okay, I can’t MAKE you try NaNo, but I am the friend who will gently and lovingly shove you off a cliff because it’s good for you.
WHAT!!??? You SAID you wanted to
go BASE jumping be a professional author.
In my 20s, I lived life like a Mountain Dew commercial. You name X Dumb Thing? Sign me up! One of my favorite suicidal activities was skydiving. If I was having a really bad time, nothing to perk me up like free falling from 15,000 feet. But I’m a natural
My little brother? Was probably the more cautious/sane one, but I could tell from this spark in his eyes that he’d one day like to just go for it and…
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