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Why 50 Shades of Grey Might be Offensive (It’s not why you think)

May 14, 2012

In case you aren’t familiar with it, 50 Shades of Grey is the newest, hottest thing in the book market. It’s effectively Twilight with whips and chains–almost literally. The series started out as online fan fiction about the Twilight characters, moving them to Seattle and adding some…umm…accessories to the torrid love affair between Edward and Bella. It grew wings on the Interwebs fan fiction sights and got the attention of a lot of people via word of mouth.

Through a series of developments, the author, EL James, withdrew the fan fiction and reworked it, changing the characters into a young college graduate named Anastasia Steele and billionaire Christian Grey. To get a job with Mr. Grey, Anastasia signs a contract that gives him complete control over her life, including the parts we don’t typically write about on this fine, high-quality, PG-13 rated blog.

The resulting books have been wildly successful and have even developed a new subgenre–mommyporn. Being, you know, a guy, I have a strong aversion to all things Twilight-related. I haven’t read the series. But agent Kristin Nelson is familiar with them, and has concerns about their content. Not the handcuffs and riding crops and the spatula (oh, wait, that was Stripes). She’s more concerned about the lack of quality in the stories and how it sets unrealistic expectations from writers and makes everyone else’s jobs harder. Among the descriptions for the writing in the her blog post and comments: campy, hot, so bad it’s good, and horrific. One commenter attributed their popularity with the general failure of the American educational system.

One of Anastasia’s problems is that she’s never had the Aunt Jemima Treatment.

But they’re selling for a reason. And without reading them, that reason probably has something to do with solid storytelling and being at the right place at the right time. No doubt EL James put a lot of work into her novels. But they are what they are. If she eventually improved her craft and wrote a literary masterpiece, it would probably crash and burn.

One of the comments to Nelson’s blog post about the issue sums up the issue quite nicely with one word: Twinkies. Twinkies sell like crazy, but they aren’t good food and no one mistakes them for good food. They’re Twinkies. The 50 Shades books are literary Twinkies. For lots of people Twinkies have a time and a place, and that’s usually not for dinner.

But the success of the series means other people will imitate it. And there will be fan fiction copies of this series–which was a fan fiction copy of another series that no one will ever confuse with high literature. With each copy, the quality slides a little.

That won’t stop a deluge of poorly executed, ham-fisted attempts to capture the lightning in a bottle (and transfer it to various sensitive body parts via the toys in Mr. Grey’s red room of pain). But it will help your work stand out, if it can get noticed above the sea of copycat Twinkies.

  1. May 14, 2012 10:01 am

    “Literary Twinkies.” Excellent. I’m using that one. Sums it right up.

  2. May 14, 2012 6:24 pm

    Great post. You have given readres something to think about. Shades of . . . well that’s another article.

  3. May 14, 2012 6:25 pm

    Spatulas and boots are hot.

  4. Blair Wills permalink
    June 27, 2012 4:12 pm

    I haven’t read the series, but I really want to read them. “Literary twinkies”…haha, whatever brings home the dough, right? Ha! Who knows, maybe see could write a literary novel. Don’t judge a book by its cover (no pun intended).

    • Blair Wills permalink
      June 27, 2012 4:14 pm


  5. Blair Wills permalink
    June 27, 2012 4:18 pm

    …An archetype is another word for “copycat Twinkies”, and there are plenty of those throughout literature. 🙂

    • Jade permalink
      September 29, 2012 9:12 am

      People often use that argument when trying to lead people away from something..but in this day an age, it is almost impossible not to “copy” or “mirror” in one sense or another… everything has been done. Read the books, if you havn’t by now. Very captivating read in my opinion…

  6. Jade permalink
    September 29, 2012 9:08 am

    While the book can be a bit is still an interesting read. Definitely keeps you wanting more. So people can write blogs and say all the terrible things they want about it.. But the reality of it is you are probably either just too ashamed to admit you enjoyed it or, dissapointed you didn’t come up with the idea first.
    When this goes to film it’s going to make millions, assuming they don’t fuck up the casting! That being said NOOOOOO absolutely not Kristin Stewart!

  7. Chris Hamilton permalink
    September 29, 2012 10:25 am

    Jade, you might be interested in this post, as well:


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